Comic 13 - 013

26th May 2011, 10:00 PM in 1
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view 26th May 2011, 10:00 PM edit delete
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Page of finger-talking!

Back to the thin pen. I think it's a better choice, although my sketchy style doesn't serve it well. Maybe I need to properly ink my pages, but I don't have that much free time.

You should find the art steadily improving. While I can do good coloring and inking, it takes forever, so this will only get the things I've figured out how to do fast.

... Dr. Kirk is the local "mechanic" (roboticist), if that wasn't clear.

Comments:

JasperWB 27th May 2011, 12:19 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
Yeah thin pen looks a lot better and it looks fine with the sketchy style as well.
view 27th May 2011, 1:29 AM edit delete reply
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Yeah, I actually used the fat pen last page because I forgot to delete it from my earlier project. I didn't realize it until I read the finished page and said, "why the hell is everything so huge?"
lenadventures 31st Mar 2012, 2:28 PM edit delete reply
lenadventures
Oh I'm really liking this story!
Love your style too! ^-^
view 31st Mar 2012, 2:45 PM edit delete reply
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Thanks! It has some pornish moments, though.
Reading In 2015 9th Nov 2015, 9:35 AM edit delete reply
Reading second time now. Nothing about the story here, no spoilers, no worries.

But commenter JasperWB goes ON and ON AND ON about Carol throughout the life of his comments about the comic. I think I finally know why: 2nd-to-last panel on this page. I'd LOOOONG forgotten it, couldn't remember who Carol was for a long time till someone said, "She's the one who [XXXX]."

This has to be the moment JasperWB fell in Obsession with her :p . Lovely!

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