Comic 191 - Beanbag

8th Jan 2012, 11:53 PM in Tiptoe
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view 8th Jan 2012, 11:53 PM edit delete
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Originally, this scene was her on the glass staircase. But I couldn't make it work in simple lineart and such basic colors. So it's on a beanbag chair.

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JasperWB 9th Jan 2012, 12:24 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
View I stand up and literally salute you. Simple as that. You are like...amazing. You have to be a deity. Just wow. Your work is like...the perfect story. The stuff I always wanted.

I just hope Jim waits till he gets off the train. It's not a metro bus after all.
view 9th Jan 2012, 12:30 AM edit delete reply
view
Tone it down...
cattservant 9th Jan 2012, 12:46 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
About your 200,000 hours of community service; Your 'community' feels very well serviced indeed! And, they want to do all they can to keep your creative juices well liquified and flowing freely. Really! Just ask any one...
jst56strong 9th Jan 2012, 3:36 AM edit delete reply
You da robot View.you da robot.
RandomTroll 9th Jan 2012, 1:18 AM edit delete reply
I have been entertained.

I now worship you, as my artistic god.
cattservant 9th Jan 2012, 5:13 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
Small crowd tonight, but quite spiritual for all that...
Tenchirizu 9th Jan 2012, 6:33 AM edit delete reply
Tenchirizu
Dirty feet are always dirty haha..and a beanbag chair I think would be much more comfortable for the frustrated Mary.
cattservant 9th Jan 2012, 2:39 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
You have a great eye for detail!
Tenchirizu 10th Jan 2012, 3:37 AM edit delete reply
Tenchirizu
Thank you, I wish that were always true. X)
InfernalShell 9th Jan 2012, 6:52 AM edit delete reply
Well that was hot.

It's mah first time posting, but I'd like to say I've really enjoyed it so far, love the characters! Such good development :D
view 9th Jan 2012, 1:24 PM edit delete reply
view
Thanks, and welcome.
Running Joke 9th Jan 2012, 10:19 AM edit delete reply
Honestly? I like this scene better on the bean bag. Seams like a more natural progression of events this way.
JasperWB 9th Jan 2012, 10:35 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
On the staircase would have more of a sense of the inability for her to control herself. Couldn't even make it somewhere "private", just had to do it. I'd have liked to have seen that if it could have worked.
view 9th Jan 2012, 1:24 PM edit delete reply
view
That was the idea. Didn't work out, though.
Reading In 2015 26th Oct 2015, 3:25 PM edit delete reply
That's exACTly what I got from this scene, though! One frame with her outside, see the grass? Next frame, I presume the first room, and flop onto the beanbag. I like the beanbag better than staircase; definitely more comfortable, and to me, more sensible. Since she flopped right onto the beanbag in the first room, rather than heading for a bed or bath or whatever, that precisely portrayed the "I could not get any further" vibe. ... So I have to disagree with the JasperWB of about three years ago; the stairs would *not* have *More* of a sense of inability to control herself. In fact, stairs are rarely immediately inside the door of an actual house (as opposed to a walk up apartment or duplex or something), so dropping him onto the beanbag seems even more immediate to me. Could not even make it to the stairs!
Panda! 9th Jan 2012, 7:50 PM edit delete reply
Kiki don't judge me! Kiki Mary needs happy time.
cattservant 9th Jan 2012, 8:30 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
But can she stop with just one?!.
Surreal 7th Feb 2012, 11:00 PM edit delete reply
I love this page not just because it's hot, but because I can relate so fucking much. And I'm a dude. And in my cases the situation hadn't even advanced as far. It's just a really real moment. Something I'm sure a lot of people have experienced. You know, you just have to do it immediately after--while the feeling and the experience are still fresh in your mind.
view 7th Feb 2012, 11:08 PM edit delete reply
view
Well, sure!
Hogan 26th Jul 2012, 7:20 PM edit delete reply
Hogan
Looks like he got her halfway there allready :)
Solid Snake 3rd Jun 2014, 8:45 PM edit delete reply
Solid Snake
Well thats the end of these underwears

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