Comic 20 - 020

2nd Jun 2011, 12:24 AM in 1
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view 2nd Jun 2011, 12:24 AM edit delete
This page contains somewhat gratuitous nudity. While it is important to the story, it's also important for a meta-reason: I wanted to make it absolutely clear that this comic will occasionally feature this sort of thing. If this page makes you terribly uncomfortable, it might be best to stop reading.

The whole series is labeled properly as adult content, so I think that side is all set.

This is the reason that there was a light under the pier. It's also very helpful for her, she can always see her pier really easily at night. If she's really far away, she can pop to the surface and see the giant freaking beacon that is her house.


hrwilliams 2nd Jun 2011, 12:30 AM edit delete reply
People who are that embarrassed about being caught naked probably shouldn't get naked outdoors. ;)

Excellent shading on this page!
view 2nd Jun 2011, 12:31 AM edit delete reply
She really lives out in the middle of nowhere.
Prestidigititis 2nd Jun 2011, 1:24 AM edit delete reply
Nudity drawn as engagingly as you draw it is never gratuitous in my book.

I discovered both of your sexy stories when they were completely drawn and posted. The pacing was exquisite, the characters were delightful. Now that I have to wait an actual day or so before I get to see the next's agonizing!

...Stupid unreasonable desire for instant gratification, always messin' with me.
view 2nd Jun 2011, 1:34 AM edit delete reply
MY stories move slowly enough that even if they're already done, it's still nowhere near instant!
kill3st 2nd Jun 2011, 2:37 AM edit delete reply

You see what I'm talking about now!?!? The story is what holds you, and the art only helps it along the way.
kill3st 2nd Jun 2011, 2:45 AM edit delete reply
Also, view, how you drew her boobs floating in the water in panel 7, I absolutely love small details like that... keep up the good work!!!
Sorrowborn 2nd Jun 2011, 5:00 AM edit delete reply
See that look on her face, I too have made that look many a time in my life.
duLapel 2nd Jun 2011, 5:24 AM edit delete reply
You certainly know your anatomy, View, and your foreshortening is wonderful.

I noticed that Mary has no snorkel... I’m wondering if her mask has some miniature built in breathing device. The glimpses we get of it have the lower half obscured; so we really don’t know if it covers her mouth. Of course she really might have gills like a supermarionation mermaid... and “she hates being called ‘Marina...’” huh... go figure.

Prestidigititis 2nd Jun 2011, 5:42 AM edit delete reply
@view I counteract the deliberate pacing of your stories by masturbating to every page, regardless of graphic action.


Nah, I'm just kiddin' ya. You're a good sport.
squirrel 2nd Jun 2011, 6:16 AM edit delete reply
i found you its awesome yay i read a few of your other works and i love hem so this will be really cool
kill3st 2nd Jun 2011, 7:15 AM edit delete reply
Lol @ prestidigititis...
view 2nd Jun 2011, 12:31 PM edit delete reply
@duLapel: You guessed right about the goggles. I've been obscuring it just because I didn't want to have to talk about it much, but that's a full face mask, not just goggles. It only has a little air in it, but it's enough for the 5m depths she's diving at now.

She, uh, she doesn't have gills.

@squirrel If you've read a few of my other works, you've read all my works!
Shaman 2nd Jun 2011, 1:21 PM edit delete reply
Such a beautifully drawn NATURAL female body! THIS is what comics need today! GREAT WORK :))

And now for a tasteless pervy uncle joke: "I wouldn't mind HER Gap!"
omega667 2nd Jun 2011, 2:51 PM edit delete reply
i was a fan of chear and les and i gotta say im loving this to.
JasperWB 2nd Jun 2011, 5:38 PM edit delete reply
You really do draw the human figure well, especially the female. looking all the time.
view 2nd Jun 2011, 9:35 PM edit delete reply
@Shaman: Yes, what comics need today is MORE NAKED WIMMENFOLK! 'Cause there just ain't enough of 'em!

@omega, that's good to hear, thanks.

Iamari 3rd Jun 2011, 5:45 AM edit delete reply
One of the best things about your comics is your attention to details. No 1's mentioned it so I will. I love how you drew a line for the skin indentation where the mask was on her face. I love that about your comics. You did it in Les and Cheer, and I'm giddy as a schoolgirl to see you're still putting that much care into your work. Thank you very much for your time.
Shaman 3rd Jun 2011, 12:33 PM edit delete reply
Well there's never enough naked wimmenfolk anywhere LOL But having them drawn with logically natural bodies is refreshing in this day and age of botox and implants ;)
linkman6499 2nd Jul 2011, 2:29 AM edit delete reply
still amazing drawings, and WOOOW HER FACE HAHAHHA
view 2nd Jul 2011, 2:33 AM edit delete reply
I've been trying to think of an emoticon for it. Something like 8`^
Guest 22nd Jul 2011, 8:39 AM edit delete reply
She reminds me now from a work of yours on hentia foundry