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23rd Jun 2011, 5:17 PM in 2
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view 23rd Jun 2011, 5:17 PM edit delete
I really like comics for these kinds of scenes. I like trying to show her thoughts and concerns panel to panel, rather than using bubbles or text. I hope her thoughts and concerns come across to all the readers.

As for pacing, this is a seriously decompressed page! I am reasonably sure there can't be more than two or three other comics in the world where more than one whole page was spent on a lady adjusting her cleavage.


JasperWB 23rd Jun 2011, 6:44 PM edit delete reply
This is a classic page. I love it! You did an amazing job of having her speak without saying a word. Her facial expressions...this is just an amazing page!

And I like the boobs closeups too. I'll admit it.
elfolampo 23rd Jun 2011, 7:51 PM edit delete reply
I'm not sure about the "one page" thing, but this page is also full of panels, and 11 panels IS a lot.
duLapel 23rd Jun 2011, 11:19 PM edit delete reply
The cowardly find courage in whisky,
when there is something that must be done.
But a shy girl desiring to be frisky,
finding courage in her cleavage is fun.

Wonderful nonverbal sequential art... Will Eisner would have applauded...

I'm amazed the fortifying effect of one additional undone button has! Ô_o

Prestidigititis 24th Jun 2011, 12:16 AM edit delete reply
Actually, I have all the back-issues of "Scoop-Shift," the comic devoted to the erotic art of brassiere and cleavage adjustment.
view 24th Jun 2011, 12:18 AM edit delete reply
@duLapel: She's not shy, she's just not confident in her body/appeal.

@Presti: Really?
duLapel 24th Jun 2011, 12:37 AM edit delete reply
I know... but " a girl not confident in her body/appeal" had too many syllables... T_T I'm such a lousy poet...
view 24th Jun 2011, 12:51 AM edit delete reply
She can't see the appeal
of short height and soft feel
JasperWB 24th Jun 2011, 12:53 AM edit delete reply
You know, NOW is when it should have been raining.
view 24th Jun 2011, 1:00 AM edit delete reply
You just want more see-through clothes... well, have patience! A lot of patience.
JasperWB 24th Jun 2011, 1:39 AM edit delete reply
Naw. Panel four here will do me for at least 40 pages. I'm just waiting on the romantic storyline to develop more.
Prestidigititis 24th Jun 2011, 3:11 AM edit delete reply
@view Nah, not really.

Think there might be a market for it?
view 24th Jun 2011, 3:17 AM edit delete reply
It would be fun to find out, at least.
Iamari 24th Jun 2011, 5:13 AM edit delete reply
After reading the comments I have 1 thing to say/type, I think Mary is beautiful. She's short, spunky, hardworking, not afraid to get dirty, and not afraid to lay the smackdown on people if and when they deserve it.
Shadowstitch 24th Jun 2011, 8:15 AM edit delete reply
Guhh, she's so ridiculously cute.

Don't sweat the pace, man. Making a comic isn't a race, just produce comics that show what you want to show, say what you want to say, and people will enjoy it no matter what. Hell, you could spend a week detailing the daily trevails of the Octopi, and no one would mind.
Prestidigititis 24th Jun 2011, 9:16 AM edit delete reply
@view: I smell a collaboration!

(It smells like raspberry compote.)
Djeroon 19th Jul 2011, 8:42 PM edit delete reply
LMAO!!! This page is both brilliant storytelling and very cute and funny. Best kind of fanservice ever! And one of the best uses of story driven decompression I've seen lately. Such a evocative way of showing us how she feels. Very much a "a picture is worth a 1000 words" kind of page.
view 19th Jul 2011, 8:44 PM edit delete reply
I like this page, too!
Hogan 26th Jul 2012, 4:26 PM edit delete reply
Jeez... the work she puts into this amounts to a Sniper taking aim for a Head Shot! :D
La rosa 25th Jun 2018, 3:21 PM edit delete reply
La rosa
Just some minor adjustments, deep breath, and off you go