Comic 67 - 067

21st Jul 2011, 12:10 PM in 2
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view 21st Jul 2011, 12:10 PM edit delete
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This page was an experiment, and a tough page to draw. Well, I hope it makes sense, it's all about technology.

Please note, her shirt cannot see underneath her bra. It's just programmed to fake it with her skin color. So, no nipples.

By the way, she's oriented so Jim can just barely catch a glimpse if he ever bothers to look over (for five panels), but Esteban will just she her back. I tried to subtly indicate that with the orientation of everyone.

Comments:

jst56strong 21st Jul 2011, 2:04 PM edit delete reply
awesome work. :D
Shipp 21st Jul 2011, 2:44 PM edit delete reply
Shipp
A shirt can go transparent but not simulate nipples.

What kind of future is this >:[
view 21st Jul 2011, 8:20 PM edit delete reply
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She just didn't program it to. If she wants to show her nipples, she'll take it off entirely!
Shipp 21st Jul 2011, 8:38 PM edit delete reply
Shipp
Actually, I have a bit of a suggestion too.

Would it be possible to rename the pages so they have a short line from the page in question? I see a lot of longer story comics doing it, and it certainly helps. It's getting a tad difficult to backtrack to a certain page with all these pages now.
Just wondering.
view 21st Jul 2011, 8:40 PM edit delete reply
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I was thinking about that. I might start doing that as of chapter 3.

There's also a transcription/search option, but I'm not interested in transcribing.
kill3st 21st Jul 2011, 3:24 PM edit delete reply
kill3st
She already doesn't have a chance against Mary, but now I realize just how hard a battle she has...
You need to have a sleepover/ofuro scene... with Miwa and Mary... ( I keep forgetting you're trying to fight the Japanese feeling...) lol
view 21st Jul 2011, 8:22 PM edit delete reply
view
Actually, there is a sleepover scene, but it's pretty weird and not for a while.
kill3st 21st Jul 2011, 6:33 PM edit delete reply
kill3st
Are her hands underneath her shirt???
JasperWB 21st Jul 2011, 6:36 PM edit delete reply
JasperWB
I think it's a coincidence that the shirt is rendering invisible in the shape of hands?

That or clearly we are missing a VERY important panel!
view 21st Jul 2011, 8:21 PM edit delete reply
view
She just grabbed her own chest for a second...
JasperWB 21st Jul 2011, 11:17 PM edit delete reply
JasperWB
Ohh. I see it now. All of those panels make sense now. You have to activate it to become invisible by pressing on it?
view 21st Jul 2011, 11:58 PM edit delete reply
view
She's got different gestures for various features.
kill3st 22nd Jul 2011, 12:17 AM edit delete reply
kill3st
So the clear stripes are because she swiped her hands over her breasts?
view 22nd Jul 2011, 1:15 AM edit delete reply
view
Knife edge, fingertip, palm, yeah.
jst56strong 21st Jul 2011, 11:19 PM edit delete reply
I have a bet with a friend. He said the comic was gunna cap at 125 but i think your gunna take it longer. Who's right?
view 21st Jul 2011, 11:58 PM edit delete reply
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It's way longer than 125. Probably 250?
jst56strong 22nd Jul 2011, 12:16 AM edit delete reply
WOOOOOOOOT 25$ and also, I'm so happy I’ll get to enjoy your comic for quite a long time to come.
kill3st 22nd Jul 2011, 3:20 AM edit delete reply
kill3st
Ya know, view, your comic is the high point of my day... I look forward to your comic about as much as I enjoy clocking out @ the end of the work day... (that's a lot!!!)
view 22nd Jul 2011, 3:24 AM edit delete reply
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That makes me very... sad! Go do something amazing, I'll still be here when you get back.
JasperWB 22nd Jul 2011, 4:22 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
You REALLY don't want to hear what I do with my life. This comic, the anticipation of TES:Skyrim coming out, and the yield of my garden are the only things I enjoy in my life period.

I need to take up a gambling addiction I think.
Prestidigititis 22nd Jul 2011, 8:26 AM edit delete reply
Prestidigititis
I think I can help you there, Jasper. You're independently wealthy, right?
Djeroon 22nd Jul 2011, 9:44 AM edit delete reply
Djeroon
I so like this page!! And not just because of the fanservice. It is so packed with two conversations going on in each panel. Must have been tricky to pull off. (since the panels themselves are relatively small too) Final panel is very cute and creative use of space by fitting all characters in the panel by means of Miwa's see-through shirt.
view 22nd Jul 2011, 12:23 PM edit delete reply
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I was tricky, and I'm not super-happy with it, but it was fun!
Warmachine 24th Jul 2011, 3:51 PM edit delete reply
That is perhaps the coolest shirt I've ever seen.

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