Comic 90 - Guilt

28th Aug 2011, 11:53 PM in 3
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I'm uploading this well ahead of time due to the unlikelyhood that I will have power or internet access.

This week, I will upload 1d6 comic pages.

Comments:

Guest 29th Aug 2011, 1:58 AM edit delete reply
Make sure you equip your +1 stylus of insane artwork.
Haelcione 29th Aug 2011, 1:59 AM edit delete reply
Err... helps to log in before commenting i guess.
Haelcione 29th Aug 2011, 2:00 AM edit delete reply
Err... helps to log in before commenting i guess.
JasperWB 29th Aug 2011, 2:23 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
Awww. Now watch as Jim does something stupid and ruins the moment.
view 29th Aug 2011, 3:06 AM edit delete reply
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Hey, don't underestimate me!
Prestidigititis 29th Aug 2011, 11:54 PM edit delete reply
Prestidigititis
Isn't OC underestimating Jim and not you?
view 30th Aug 2011, 12:24 AM edit delete reply
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... No, I think he's got Jim down pat.
Guest 29th Aug 2011, 3:22 AM edit delete reply
I'm guessing you still want feedback, so here's a little.

These two pages have gone a bit too fast, more transitional frames would allow us to dwell on the moments a bit more. You accomplished this very well in "Cheer" and now it seems you're rushing unnecesarily. You draw facial expressions very well, and your body language is improving with every frame such that its starting to look professional. Show us more of that and let us enjoy your. Art as well as your story.

If this continues to look this good, you'll need to publish this as a graphic novel.

Also, I'm hooked, so please don't take the criticism badly.
view 29th Aug 2011, 3:46 AM edit delete reply
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This sort of critique is good, although I prefer names attached to it.

These pages are moving a bit fast, I agree. I'm kind of rushed because of life, but it's not a real great idea to let my art reflect that.

I'll be a bit more cautious in the upcoming pages.
Iamari 29th Aug 2011, 4:08 AM edit delete reply
Please don't have Jim freak out and accidentally kick her in the face. That would just suck.
ted 29th Aug 2011, 4:26 AM edit delete reply
Call me Ted.
view 29th Aug 2011, 4:00 PM edit delete reply
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The reply function seems to be screwy, I presume you're the reviewer.
Hogan 26th Jul 2012, 5:03 PM edit delete reply
Hogan
That kind of make-up is always appreciated :)
dutchguy 25th Sep 2016, 12:51 PM edit delete reply
Just a bit of foreshadowing to the big reveal

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