Comic 98 - Chapter 4

9th Sep 2011, 12:04 AM in Rain
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Chapter 3 turned out short. This is the first time I've felt a shadow of the pressure to fill a certain number of pages. Although, obviously, nobody is requiring that of me.

The chapter turned out short because I rushed part of it, and came up with a way to really shorten the last part of it since it was so flabby as originally scripted.

In this chapter, we learn a lot about Miwa and adolescence.

Comments:

duLapel 9th Sep 2011, 2:10 AM edit delete reply
duLapel
It looks to me that you have taken up the challenge, view,
of making Miwa a likable character we can root for... Good luck! ^_^
view 9th Sep 2011, 2:10 AM edit delete reply
view
Naw, you're not supposed to like her.
Dan 11th Sep 2011, 9:03 AM edit delete reply
Well, I do. :)
JasperWB 9th Sep 2011, 3:51 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
Adolescence? But I don't want to learn about adolescence. I didn't even when I was an adolescent. I only moved on because I had to start signing papers with my full name...
view 9th Sep 2011, 4:06 AM edit delete reply
view
Your adolescence didn't come with a brand new robot body!
JasperWB 9th Sep 2011, 4:32 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
Eh, true enough.
Karma 9th Sep 2011, 9:04 PM edit delete reply
how do i find your other works? i have been looking.
view 9th Sep 2011, 9:42 PM edit delete reply
view
If you mean my other works, they're all porn. You can find them here:

www.hentai-foundry.com/user-forview.php

If you mean JasperWB's other works, I dunno.
JasperWB 10th Sep 2011, 3:54 AM edit delete reply
JasperWB
He must mean you. I can't finish anything I start and don't make anything worth blowing to hell anyway lol
Iamari 10th Sep 2011, 5:07 AM edit delete reply
I have 2 stupid questions. 1. Is that mud on Miwa a weird side effect of her phase clothes getting wet? 2. If that is mud, do you like getting your girls dirty?
view 10th Sep 2011, 12:49 PM edit delete reply
view
1) There's no mud. 2) Yes.
JasperWB 10th Sep 2011, 5:07 PM edit delete reply
JasperWB
Then we need a three round mud wrestling competition for Jim in the end. I HAVE PROCLAIMED IT.
Iamari 11th Sep 2011, 5:23 AM edit delete reply
Sorry, Forgot to add an "or" in front of the "A weird side effect".
Ephemeros 10th Sep 2011, 5:01 PM edit delete reply
Ephemeros
I nearly didn't continue based on the first 3 pages, but I'm so very glad I did, I've caught up now and I love the story and characters. And your style. :D<3
view 10th Sep 2011, 7:03 PM edit delete reply
view
I've been thinking about redrawing page 2...
Ephemeros 10th Sep 2011, 7:15 PM edit delete reply
Ephemeros
I think they are well-drawn, and in hindsight it makes sense, but it didn't grab my attention, you know?
.. On the whole I love this though! I didn't mean to sound so negative /facedesk
view 10th Sep 2011, 7:56 PM edit delete reply
view
It's valuable feedback.
Gyde 11th Sep 2011, 4:29 AM edit delete reply
I kind of like page 2 as it is. It gives a nice look into how your art is progressing.
Robear93 21st Mar 2014, 5:58 AM edit delete reply
Mary was so adorably cute in that last page. I like however how different Miwa is... makes for an interesting story.

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